New benches on the back nine
One sentence a neighbor would stop for. Paragraph 1, so the post opens with a little more voice than the rest.
The plain facts. What was done, where on the course, and who it was done with. Name the partners — this is where grant credit lands.
$10,000 matched. 4 acres. 6 schools.
One or two sentences tied to the mission. Not a paragraph of it — the reader already knows they are on FOAM's site.
The bridge to the ask. One sentence that makes the button below feel like the obvious next thing rather than an advert.
